Hello Everyone!

Here we are with the start of Chapter 2: The Anarchy of Aphrodite.  Thanks for sticking with me this far!

I learnt a lot over the last few months working on the weekly pages and got some awesome feedback from the good people over at /r/comic_crits .

The main critiques raised centered around my writing style,  the reuse of certain poses and questioned the necessity of some of my self-imposed rules.

To that end I plan to revise the “Rule of 3” a bit.

Each page of Grimm & Tonic will be consist of:

  • No more than 6 panels (This is to give me creative room to really push the story narritively)
  • 3 colors and/or shades
  • 3 characters (at most)
  • 1 Major story beat ( This is to fight my tendency to drag a plot point across multiple pages)